Tripling all the creature tokens created is very strong, and a simple Raise the Alarm can net you six bodies
It has a similar endgame to Four Knocks from a different Doctor Who precon, but the Trap has more of a gambler's feel to it, and promises nothing upfront
It's too much setting up most of the time
Nadiers Nightblade (CMR) is even better, as it loses the requirement for a commander to be present, and drains rather than bleeds
Kamigawa: Neon Dynasty has given the Shrine deck many tools to succeed, and the cards above form the basics of a deck that players can modify with their own collections and creativity
Add on top of that evasion, ward, and getting a +1/+1 each time Valgavoth triggers that card draw, and you've got the perfect commander to build a red/black deck around.